Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, November 22, 2019
Speech
In writing for the past couple of weeks we have been working on speeches to read out to our homebase and our homebase teacher would choose 2 people to go speech canterbury's. My Speech is about what I want to be when i'm older and about it. Do you like writing Speech's?
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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This is really good next time use more punctuation and be clear on what your goals are going to be to get where you want to get but overall its really good keep it up. -Lachlan
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