Kia Ora,
Welcome back from the holidays, how was your holidays?
In writing we were looking at a video called catch a lot and we had to write descriptive sentences about a certain scene. After we had finished our sentences we were asked to turn it into a descriptive paragraph. We had 2 days to do this but here's what I wrote:
The scene we had to write about was when the the eye was behind the seagull and the man getting tipped out of the dingy/boat. Thanks for reading :)
Hope you enjoy yous time back at school!
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